User Test- interface design (refine)

4th page
3rd page
2nd page
1st page


We're asked to create interface design for our client(classmate) by using simplicity style.
My client was Yeu Jian. He love manga, so I create these interface based on it.
How is it ? look simple/complex ?can see those fonts?how about the colour ?
Or any suggestion ?

Refine - the 4th page horizontal bar move to center
the 3rd page I change whole page
the 1st & 2nd page I refine the mistake.


* Your comment is greatly appreciated.